Test99例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。www.test99.com

Test992.不知所云www.test99.com

Test99例：Many companies began using computers mouth. www.test99.com

Test993.段落过长，不分段主语与动词一致问题www.test99.com

Test99She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time. www.test99.com

Test99主语和动词在数方面不一致。www.test99.com

Test994.句子别扭We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed. www.test99.com

Test99措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。www.test99.com

Test995.不要使用缩写www.test99.com

Test99在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(cant，dont，its，well，theyve等等)，而应当使用单词的完整形式(cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。www.test99.com

Test996.关联词语重复www.test99.com

Test99Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores. www.test99.com

Test99不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。www.test99.com

Test997.句子不完整www.test99.com

Test99Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to getsintoscollege. For example, my friend in high school. www.test99.com

Test99句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。www.test99.com

Test998.不要使用get www.test99.com

Test99When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and gotsintosbed. www.test99.com

Test99Get太不正式，意思也过于含糊，不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个更加具体的单词，如become, receive, find, achieve,等等。www.test99.com

Test999.书写难以辨认信息不正确www.test99.com

Test99I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.www.test99.com

Test99信息不正确，或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确(如果确实是正确的，应当解释为什么这样，因为读者不认为是正确的)。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百；我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为保险起见，应当使用many或most。非英语单词Computers are very helpful and advantageable.尽管看起来象个单词，其实不是，至少不是个英文单词。使用这个单词的另一种形式。www.test99.com

Test9910.介词多余www.test99.com

Test99I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband. www.test99.com

Test99在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因而不能在它们前面添加介词。www.test99.com

Test9911.跑题或不相关www.test99.com

Test99There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car. www.test99.com

Test99这个意思与文章的主题无关。www.test99.com

Test9912.陈词滥调www.test99.com

Test99It is okay for children to fail sometimes.www.test99.com

Test99所表达的意思很普通大多数人都已经知道到了，因而就没有必要再说出来。www.test99.com

Test9913.标点问题www.test99.com

Test99I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet. www.test99.com

Test99这是一个非常普遍的问题！许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时候。www.test99.com

Test9914.重复冗余www.test99.com

Test99Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints. www.test99.com

Test99一种意思的表述不止一次，或者某个词语不必要。www.test99.com

Test9915.单数/复数www.test99.com

Test99Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths. www.test99.com

Test99单词需要从单数变为复数，或者由复数变成单数。单数可数名词单数可数名词不能单独使用，应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词(a, the, my, his, her, Garys, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。www.test99.com

Test9916.拼写错误主语、的动词或宾语有问题www.test99.com

Test99I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday. www.test99.com

Test99句子的基本结构有问题缺少主语、的动词或宾语，或者这些成分重复。www.test99.com

Test9917.语气与文章不符www.test99.com

Test99I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out. www.test99.com

Test99语气与文章其他部分不相符可能是过于正式或者太不正式。www.test99.com

Test9918.代词指代不明www.test99.com

Test99If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there. www.test99.com

Test99代词所指代的指示词(介词所代替的名词)不清楚。www.test99.com

Test9919.过于笼统www.test99.com

Test99We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse. www.test99.com

Test99句子或它所表达的意思过于笼统，不能提供多少信息。www.test99.com

Test9920.动词时态错误www.test99.com

Test99Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food. www.test99.com

Test99动词时态不正确检查一下是应该用现在时、的过去时、的将来时还是完成时等等。www.test99.com

Test9921.选词不恰当www.test99.com

Test99I was late getting home because I lost my way. www.test99.com

Test99在这种情况下不应该使用该词可选择更好的词语或者所使用的词语与文章的总体语气不符。www.test99.com

Test9922.单词形式不当www.test99.com

Test99I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth. www.test99.com

Test99所使用的单词的形式不正确检查一下应该使用该词的名词、的形容词或副词形式的哪一种。www.test99.com

Test9923.用词错误www.test99.com

Test99Even I dont speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation. www.test99.com

Test99用词错误或在此种情况下该词不是最佳用词。www.test99.com