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对6分GRE范文和pp3相关策略的分析
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广告招租，e-mail:yesize@hotmail.com 题目: "In our time, specialists of all kinds are highly overrated. We need more generalists -- people who can provide broad perspectives." 对题目的分析: This claim raises several related questions: What does it mean to be a generalist or a specialist, and what value do they have for society? Does society actually need more generalists, and are specialists, in fact, "highly overrated"?看到没有这里就是the complexity of the issue.也就是说我们写的issue covers these points的话,那么我们就会insightful analysis, and in-depth analysis咯.大家好好好想想. There are several basic positions you could take on this issue: Yes, society needs more generalists and places too high a value on specialists. No, the opposite is true. Or, it depends on various factors. Or, both /group/s are important in today culture; neither is overvalued.给出了我们可以说的方向,也就是要么肯定,要么否定,要么看具体情况(这个我个人认为中国学生很难说清楚,所以建议大家不要这样写.),要么两者都要(这个虽然很好凑字数,但是我认为文章中的连接很难做到,下面又范文和我的分析.大家看看).Your analysis might draw examples from a particular society or country, from one or more areas of society, or from various situations. It might focus on the role of generalists and specialists in relation to communications, transportation, politics, information, or technology.可以看到他要你句的例子都是很正经的,所以大家要句一些具有普遍性的例子哟Any of these approaches is valid, so long as you use relevant reasons and examples to support your position. Before you stake out a position, take a few moments to reread the claim. To analyze it, consider questions such as these: ?What are the main differences between specialists and generalists?这点比较难,也是我们喜欢回避的一点,就是通常当我们遇到a和b矛盾的问题(在我们的一般理解中是矛盾的),我们总是不去谈他们间的关系. What are the strong points of each? Do these differences always hold in various professions or situations? Could there be some specialists, for example, who also need to have very broad knowledge and general abilities to perform their work well?这是上面的延伸,也难想到. ?How do generalists and specialists function in your field?这点也能考虑到What value do you think society places on specialists and generalists? Are specialists overvalued in some situations, and not in others?容易考虑Does society really need more generalists than it has? If so, what needs would they serve?这点很好考虑到Now you can organize your thoughts /into/ two /group/s: 1) reasons and examples to support the claim 2) reasons and examples to support an opposing point of view 可以看到,说理和举例子同样重要.很多同学只是光举例子(特别是对于自己不熟悉的题目)，这样不是特别好，需要改进，我也一样。 If you find one view clearly more persuasive than the other, consider developing an argument from that perspective. As you build your argument, keep in mind the other points, which you could argue against.看到没有,可以反驳自己的假设相反观点，是凑字数和增加说服力的好方法. If both /group/s have compelling points, consider developing a position supporting, not the stated claim, but a more limited or more complex claim. Then you can use reasons and examples from both sides to justify your position. 6分范文,太漂亮了,怎么说呢,ft,我是不可能写出这样bt的issue.在心里有点harvard的味道.神了. 首先大家注意文章的格式,段和段间要空格,第一句话要空格. In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement,说了背景both positive and negative effects among persons in Western society call for a balance in which there are both specialists and generalists.一句话开头一点也不罗嗦,大家学学,别总想着怎么开头,关键是里面有没有货. Specialists are necessary insgroupsto allow society as a whole to properly and usefully assimilate the masses of new information and knowledge that have come out of research and have been widely disseminated through mass global media. As the head of Pharmacology at my university once said (and I paraphrase):"I can only research what I do because there are so many who have come before me to whom I can turn for basic knowledge. It is only because of each of the narrowly focussed individuals at&nbs......
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