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《闲聊英语第68期》一篇经过“斧正”的英语短文
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广告招租，e-mail:yesize@hotmail.com 作者：张宏（info@italian.org.cn） 刚才去搜狐的英语学习论坛，看到nephewliang网友用英文写了一篇短文，大意是介绍他所在的办公室，然后请求其他网友“斧正”。果然没过多久，wing1978网友来了，举起大斧，给这篇短文“正了正”（笑）。我个人认为，这篇短文很有代表性，其中出现的一些错误，是国内英语初学者经常犯的，所以下面我想把这篇短文中有明显错误的一组句子挑出来，请各位看看原文是怎样写的（第一行），斧手又是怎样“正”的（第二行）。为便于初学者理解，我对文字做了适当的修改和简化，因此下面的内容与帖子的内容略有出入。 ①When entering into the office, you can find everything is kept in good order. ②Stepping into the office, you will find everything is in good order. ③进入办公室，可以发现一切都井井有条。 ①The file keepers on the left are put of data in classified way. ②The file cabinets on the left are used to store classified data. ③左边的文件柜用来存放分类文件。 ①The white bookcases on the right are full of instruction and manual of different kinds. ②The white bookcases on the right are full of manuals of various kinds. ③右边的白色书柜装满了各种各样的手册。 ①The ivory-white desks, decorated with bonsais, are shining in the lighting. ②The ivory-white desks, decorated with bonsais, shine under the lights. ③装饰着盆景的乳白色办公桌闪闪发光。 ①Two air-conditioners are installed respectively near the front door and the back door. ②Two air-conditioners are installed respectively near the front and back doors. ③两台空调分别安装在前门和后门。 ①The engineering office provides a good place to the engineers of the engineering department. ②The office provides a good place for the members of the engineering department. ③这个办公室为工程部的工作人员提供了一个良好的办公场所。 ①Because of no stable working place, they worked only in the workshops. ②The lack of office space forced them to work only in the workshops. ③办公室空间的狭小迫使他们只能在车间中工作。 ①It was difficult to get together to have a meeting or to make discussion for all. ②It was difficult to get together to have a meeting or discussion. ③大家很难凑在一起开会或讨论。
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